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Monday, January 11, 2010

he's my mess

Everyone has a cross to bear,

A separate, personal burden,

Different from the world’s

A mess to clean up,

Look at him;

What a mess…

He smokes, he drinks,

He drools when he speaks,

He’s not that smart,

He doesn’t believe in God,

He’s an ex-convict.

The list is endless;

But he’s very charming,

He loves me,

He listens to me,

Even when I say rubbish.

He treats me right,

And calls me beautiful,

He cooks me dinner

When I have had a long day,

And rubs my back, when it hurts.

So don’t judge me,

I didn’t choose to love him,

It just happened,

And stop acting all superior too,

For who knows what skeletons

You have, hidden?

Just because your smile is pretty,

Doesn’t mean your heart is.

He’s MY burden,

MY cross, MY mess;

And I love him,

So how about you mind your business?

Leave my mess alone,

Clean yours up first.

Edit: This is not about me. i repeat, this is not about me, OkThanksBye

20 CerebrallyEndowed views:

TaioFierce Ameen said...

Nice.... my best part *I dint choose to him, it just happened*... thumbs up...

2cute4u said...

hmmm. well, i'm actually speechless, but don't let me keep you.. as far as when he starts to misbehave, you won't come up with excuses.. I'm sha minding my business, that's why I won't say much..

neefemi said... be honest, i think someone should be able to tell you the truth as they see it - at which point you tell them your point of view and then they should respectively naff off - but i do see your point abt him being your own mess

shorty said...

Hmmn i advice u to give this a second thought...Xx

Myne Whitman said...

Nice write-up. The truth is that some people think this way. Sometimes it works out for them. Others it becomes a disaster!

leggy said...

nice write up.
i couldnt date one of those though, love or no love.

JuaNita said...

I like this, but are you sure you'd be able to go through with it? I mean at the start it'll be alright but you might get fed up..think about it.

Enoch said...

This your cross heavy pass the original cross of Calvary.

Suru said...

Wow this is an interesting read. This mess is a real mess sha

..Moyo said...

Aha, I knew it wasn't you right from smokes and drools.

I love this Temi.
And I just realised I wasn't following most people I used to follow .. wharrahell?

CerebrallyBusy said...

@Taio: lol...thanks

@2cute4u:um...thanks but this has nothing to do with me...

@neefemi: um...yeah thanks, but it isnt about me...

shorty: thanks again...but it isnt about me...

CerebrallyBusy said...

@Myne: ahh i know right! thanks

leggy: i doubt i could either. thanks

Juanita: THIS AINT ABOUT ME OOOOO lol, cheii, thanx dear

@enoch: lol!

CerebrallyBusy said...

@suru: a reaaaaaally big mess lol, thanks dear

@Moyo: Thank you jare ::D i love you too :) an the important thing is u'r ff-ing now abi?/

Nana Yaw Asiedu said...

it's not about you, yes, but it is beautifully thought up. "MY cross, MY mess; And I love him" the story of love, no? Genius.

Mr.Funnyhoneymoney said...

well what can i say this is good and erryone needs a mess in some or the other and sometimes it comes in love

David.фаворит Бога номер-один said...

LOL @enoch...
hmm, i liked made a lot of
sense and holds a lot of untold
reasons but...???

CerebrallyBusy said...

@N.Y Ashiedu: the story of love indeed. THANK YOU!

@mrFHM: i mean, like really i wholeheartedly agree :)

David, hmmn there is no but oooo...what but are you referring to??

..Moyo said...

i loff you more.
and yes I am :)

Dekky said...

This is am loving it.

CerebrallyBusy said...

thanks kemi! X